Mayang Sari and The Step-mother

(1) OPINION

  This story about a lucky girl even though she had a suffered life because of her step-mother at first.Her name is Mayang Sari.While her step-mother's name is Mak munah and step-sister's,Endon.They treatedThey were jealous of her because she was beautiful.Mak Munah and Endon like to forced Mayang Sari do all the housework.This story also show how patient Mayang Sari than us in our daily life.This story not too bad and interesting to read.The most important thing is the happy ending.Everyone like to read a story which have a great happy ending.The best part in this story also tell us that Mak Munah and Endon treat her like a maid till one day the prince was riding by on his horse near Mayang Sari's house.At the same time Mayang Sari being scolded by her stepmother because she make a platte fell on the floor and her face are smeared with black ash from the kitchen.The prince rode his horse near the house and ask them what's going on right there.Mak Munah answered the prince question and was very frightened.The prince looked at Mayang Sari and was amazed at the beauty of her after Mak Munah's wash Mayang Sari's face.The prince proposed Mayang Sari to be his queen and stay in palace.Mayang Sari were happy to heard that and after that she lived happily in palace while Endon and Mak Munah were punished and become servants in the palace.

What you will do if you're a director . What kind of story did you suggest?
If I being a director,I would like to make Ashley Greene as Mayang Sari and I want to change the character of Mak Munah and Endon to be good and kind person so that they can live happily ever and after.